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03 September 2011 @ 12:24 pm
Stronger - Part 1  




Title: Stronger ~ Part 1
Rating: Hard R/NC 17 depending on the chapter.
Genre: Angst. teh Love. More Angst
Characters: Brian, Justin & their non-defined, non-conventional family.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my thoughts, and even then sometimes, I rent.
Timeline: Post-513 All canon assumed.
Summary: That which does not kill us...
Author's Note: This is a work in progress. I am a slow writer - there's no getting around that - but I promise that it will be completed. Comments feed the muse. Just sayin'.

For Karen, without whom my story would not be the same.

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anno53 on September 3rd, 2011 10:23 pm (UTC)
I think you have an amazing start to your story. I totally feel Justin's anguish in not knowing what's going on ... and I'm right there with him!
q_dictedq_dicted on September 3rd, 2011 10:53 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it! And it's good you're there with Justin - he's going to need all the support he can get ;-)

Thanks for reading, and for the comment.
Carolbrokeaholic on September 3rd, 2011 11:19 pm (UTC)
Great start, looking forward to more.
q_dicted: StrongerBq_dicted on September 3rd, 2011 11:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you're reading. It means so much.
flequillitosflequillitos on September 4th, 2011 02:40 am (UTC)
the cancer is back??? tell me no, tell me no!! I can't believe it, poor them :(

I'm totally hooked!
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 10:31 am (UTC)
tell me no, tell me no!!

Ummm, no? *averts eyes*

Sorry... I'm afraid Justin's reaction to those words was the proper one. :(

Thank you for reading and I hope you stay hooked through the rest of their journey!


Toto_too514: lightning stormtoto_too514 on September 4th, 2011 03:52 am (UTC)
WOW!

This grabbed me and then the words just wouldn't let me go - so wonderfully sad... so perfectly Brian and Justin.
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 10:36 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so pleased to see you here and reading. Wonderfully sad - that about says it all when it comes to angst, doesn't it? I do love to see our boys rise to the challenges that life presents them. I hope you'll enjoy what's to come, too.
sjmpetssjmpets on September 4th, 2011 05:47 am (UTC)
so i'm thinking brian was in town to see an oncologist without letting justin know that the cancer is back.

how bad is it going to get? brian sick again and a baby on the way. odds are pretty bad.

can't wait for more.
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 10:44 am (UTC)
Good thinking ;) Sometimes it seems the universe really does have it in for our boys, doesn't it? 'Odds' are going to be a pretty big part of their lives for a while.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate both so very much.
bksbraceletbksbracelet on September 4th, 2011 06:08 am (UTC)
Great chapter a ;ovely long one that allowed me to get into the story so I am seriously looking forward to the next one :)
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 10:47 am (UTC)
It was a long chapter but Justin had a lot to say about his day! Very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

Little Sister 65: Brian I Can't Look Ebaylittle_sister on September 4th, 2011 07:34 am (UTC)
What a great start! Looking forward to reading more sweetie,
Hugs Ali xx
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 10:48 am (UTC)
Thank you! Hopefully the wait won't be too long.

(((hugs back)))
Bigdogz09bigdogz09 on September 4th, 2011 11:24 am (UTC)
A good strong beginning. Lots of suspense and you leave the reader wanting more. Looking forward to your next update.
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 12:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. I can't ask for more than that!
armandyouidiot: BJ kissingarmandyouidiot on September 4th, 2011 12:11 pm (UTC)
This is so good! I love your writing. I want to throttle Brian and hug him at the same time.
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 12:44 pm (UTC)
He does tend to inspire that in us, doesn't he? The man is an enigma (but he's Justin's enigma ;-)

Thank you for reading and for the lovely comment.
templeton_matempleton_ma on September 4th, 2011 12:33 pm (UTC)
Indeed. So happy to see another fic from you. It certainly brightened my day knowing that I have something great to look forward to each day. I hope this one won't make us cry our hearts out like last time ;-)
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 12:47 pm (UTC)
Eeep! I'm two for two here. I can't promise something each day or to not make you cry! (though maybe not like the last time ;-)

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I really appreciate it.
upsadaisymaisieupsadaisymaisie on September 4th, 2011 06:10 pm (UTC)
Wow, I'm addicted already, and this is only the first chapter. You've caught Brian and Justin's characters so completely. I can just see Brian behaving like this and my heart goes out to Justin. To Brian too, as something seems to be troubling him deeply.
q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 09:05 pm (UTC)
I'm so pleased you like the beginning. Our boys have a long road ahead of them!

Thanks for reading!
danidanivl4 on September 4th, 2011 07:23 pm (UTC)
"There is no mistaking Brian Kinney for any other man in the world."

And you have nailed him. I love this story! Excellent beginning and I can't wait for more. You are amazingly talented. Your narrative and dialogue have the perfect flow. I feel like I am part of the story and not just being told a story. You have Justin's voice right too. And in this entire first chapter you didn't use any of the three phrases common in most fanfic that brings a story to a screeching halt for me. But this story is so good that if you end up using one of those things at some point I won't let it bother me. :)


q_dictedq_dicted on September 4th, 2011 09:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm thrilled to see you here reading and I'm glad I didn't hit your halt buttons! *g* I hope you enjoy the rest as well.
amaranthink: B/J - showeramaranthink on September 4th, 2011 11:08 pm (UTC)
Seeing this posted put a smile on my face. Guess you decided to start posting before you finished it. Good for us, though. Patience is not my strong suit. ;)

This looks like it will be a wild ride but I would expect nothing less of you. Superbly written but that's a given with you. And as always, you capture the emotions so beautifully and with perfect clarity.

I'm looking forward to where you will take us on this journey. :)
q_dictedq_dicted on September 5th, 2011 09:48 am (UTC)
So glad to see you here!! I know I said I wouldn't post 'til it was finished this time - then went and did it anyway! For a few reasons, the main one being giving myself a kick in the ass!

Thank you for the kind words, you give me such a confidence boost!

I fear our boys are in for a bumpy ride - I hope they can keep telling me all about it ;-)
95baker on September 5th, 2011 01:11 am (UTC)
Wow...I am exhausted. But completely in a good way. Trust me. Trying to figure out what in the world is wrong. On top of that I am a worrier and Brian does not seem to be present in the future (when the baby was born).

Can't wait to see what happens next. I will be patient and get me some Kleenex. I have a bad feeling that I am going to need them.

q_dictedq_dicted on September 5th, 2011 09:53 am (UTC)
They can be two very exhausting boys (and not always in the positive, life-affirming way, hmmm? *g*) I worry about them, too. Especially when Brian starts spouting Spanish.

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it so much.
You're very eloquent when I'm drunk...caelia_canta on September 5th, 2011 01:45 am (UTC)
So when I saw that you had posted a new story, I quite literally bounced with joy. I agree with everyone here in that you have some of the most in-character portrayals of Brian and Justin that I've ever had the pleasure to read- enough so that I feel inspired to perhaps try my hand at writing a fic for this wonderful fandom myself!

However- if this fic makes me cry as much as Valediction did (which, by the way, I have read at least 10 times despite my general reluctance to read death!fic and absolute abhorrence of weeping), I may end up DANGEROUSLY dehydrated... Do us a favor and end this one happily after all the angst!
q_dicted: StrongerJBq_dicted on September 5th, 2011 10:00 am (UTC)
Wow! Being true to Brian and Justin's characters is the most important thing to me, so your kind words mean a lot! I was inspired to write Valediction by the incredible authors I found here in the B/J fandom, so to think that maybe I inspired one myself is an incredible honour. Thank you so much, and best of luck on your writing.

I don't think this is the weeper that Valediction was, but it can't hurt to have a couple tissues on hand anyway, right? *g* And maybe a bottle of water, you know, just in case.



Edited at 2011-09-05 10:01 am (UTC)